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  1. Peter Ellison
    April 14, 2018 @ 2:13 pm

    Thanks for this very interesting post. I currently work with primary schools as an adviser (and a KS1 and 2 moderator) and while I agree with much of what you say here, I feel that you and The Writing Revolution approach are missing a vital ingredient. Although I haven’t read the book yet (so apologies if this is dealt with in the book), I have watched the videos and read about the Hochman method and I wonder if it pays enough attention to oracy. The videos on the WR website show children co-constructing sentences which seem to be relatively unchallenging in that any of them could have created a similar sentence orally in response to a question (e.g. using ‘so’ or ‘because’). They appear, therefore, to be rehearsing something that, in spoken language, they already know how to do. Where much primary writing teaching falls down, in my opinion, is that teachers don’t spend long enough on ensuring that pupils thoroughly understand the content and are able to talk about it confidently before writing. The desire to ‘cover’ a range of genres is undoubtedly partially to blame but I also feel that many teachers underestimate the role of talk in constructing coherent and sophisticated ideas (and therefore sentences) because they are encouraged by senior management to ‘get something in the books’.

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    • Teachwell
      April 14, 2018 @ 5:28 pm

      I welcome critique but don’t feel it is valid in this case. This was never an outline of the book or my views on the writing in it’s all it’s facets.

      The role of oracy is covered in the book and the importance of orally rehearsing sentences during formation. I think model videos are just that and aren’t intended to show the journey that children have taken. Whether it was challenging enough for those children isn’t something I would want to comment on without knowing the children involved and I don’t think anyone can judge accurately.

      The role of oracy is something I would agree with you on however it can not be a replacement for actually writing (which is can be at times in KS1). In addition, I would say oracy itself needs to be modelled for the most disadvantaged children and requires much repetition and practice in order for disadvantaged children to acquire the ability to speak in phrases then sentences and the Hochman method lends itself to that.

      I don’t think it is the fault of teachers or their choice in terms of underestimating the importance of oracy, it’s a curriculum issue and fall out from progressive ideas about teaching writing. The notion that children can be enticed into writing drove the notion of them writing in lots of different genres (I cover that in my ResearchED talk) and this is something we as teachers were expected to make work. I am grateful that teachers rather than consultants and so-called experts are able to take the lead a bit more in the current climate thus really addressing the issues that we have faced in teaching over the last 20 (and some would say 50) years of education.

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  2. Alison Nash
    November 21, 2022 @ 9:49 pm

    Hi
    I am introducing The Writing Revolution into school and I am really interested in your mapping, but unfortunately I cannot download it. Would you be able to email it to me please?

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    • James Masters
      July 8, 2023 @ 4:00 pm

      Hi, I am also introducing TWR, and have run into the same download issue. Would you mind sending it to me as well please? Thank-you.

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      • Teachwell
        July 9, 2023 @ 12:57 pm

        If you follow me on twitter, you can then send me your email address. Alternatively, you can send a reply to this with your email but I won’t approve it to publish.

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        • Patrick Creane
          September 3, 2023 @ 5:57 pm

          Hello! Sorry to pile on with this one, but I am also integrating TWR in my teaching. Would it be possible to have a copy of the spreadsheet as well? I have added you on twitter, but it will not let me message you! My email is pcreane@arnovale.notts.sch.uk

          If not then no worries, and thank you for your excellent article!

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    • Teachwell
      July 9, 2023 @ 12:58 pm

      If you follow me on twitter, you can then send me your email address. Alternatively, you can send a reply to this with your email but I won’t approve it to publish.

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  3. Dorrie M.
    January 21, 2024 @ 5:52 pm

    Hi!
    I stumbled across your webpage as I was looking into The Writing Revolution. I am trying to decide if it will be a good fit for our school for next year. So far, I am super impressed by starting point and progression of skills. I am not on Twitter and I would love to look at your mapping as well. Thank you for going in depth on the benefits and cautions of using TWR.
    All the best,
    Dorrie

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